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 # The ⚡ULTIMATE⚡ Arduino starter template for Platformio 🐩
 
-Starting a new project using the [arduino framework](https://www.arduino.cc/) in [platformio](https://platformio.org/) can be a mess, trying to get the right board matched with the right platform, matched with the right compiler flags to make USB work or getting the correct OSC library, etc.
+Making electronics projects using the [arduino framework](https://www.arduino.cc/) in [platformio](https://platformio.org/) is amazingly fast, low-maintenance and wonderful. If you know how to set it up. Trying to get the right board matched with the right platform, matched with the right compiler flags to make USB work or getting the correct OSC library, etc.
 
-This template makes it easier to set up a nice skeleton to create a project for an arduino-supported microcontroller board using [platformio](https://platformio.org/).
+This template makes it easier by providing a nice skeleton with some cool extra features and opinionated things to turbo charge your new project.
 
-It has a lot of common things set up for most common boards used in the art/music/maker world, including a few optimizations and weird fixes. 
+It has a lot of common things set up for some common boards used in the art/music/maker world, including a few optimizations and weird fixes. 
 
 It includes suggestions for libraries to use so you don't have to dig around too much for the common stuff. Just uncomment in the platformio.ini file and recompile.